(02-02-2011, 08:50 PM)Shannon Wrote: [ -> ] (02-02-2011, 02:38 PM)subtest Wrote: [ -> ] (02-02-2011, 01:25 PM)Shannon Wrote: [ -> ]That is a $120 GC for our friend SubTest. Thank you for your service, sir. Now to go about fixing these...
Thank you Shannon for sticking to your words!
Have you sent me an email for this time? I didn't receive anything apparently.
Could you let me know if there's a deadline for using these GC please?
I also sent a PM to Jackie for the 4G upgrades.
Concerning the Arabic script I found this typo:
I now release, "let go, of," disconnect from and reject any and all reasons, emotional responses, attitudes and beliefs that would cause me to resist learning to read, write, speak or understand the Arabic language quickly, easily and enthusiastically.
This doesn't look like an error but I also noticed that in some sentences of the script you changed the order of the prevalent "read, speak, write" to "read, write, speak".
I am a man of honor. If I say I will do it, I will do it.
I had to attend my grandfather shortly after writing that post, however, and so have not had a chance to send you the GC yet. I will do that shortly.
As for the comma out of place, and changing order of words, you are getting a little bit far on now. lol A comma won't change the meaning of the statement to the subconscious mind, nor will the particular order of a series of words that are repeated.
I find myself exhausted, so I will get the GC to you, and be on to bed.
EDIT: It appears that I cannot log into the back end of the store at the moment, because I need to fix my computer. I am not sure how much time that will take, so I'll get started, and if I don't fall asleep before I finish, I'll get back to issuing the GC when I am finished.
GC well received and thank you.
While I get the humor in this and having some humble knowledge in audio editing, I understand your explanation, but my intent for selecting these errors was based from a customer's view visiting the website. If your texts are neat, well edited and without typing mistakes or anything that would elevate doubts in the customer's head your sales are likely to improve. Your entire website's presentation is your identity and sales are potentially starting right from the first web pages your visitors check. (I guess you may already know)
That's why I recommend you to change all script's font to the same one. Attract positive energy for exemple is different from the other ones. Some scripts have some unexpected wide spaces between sentences.
Pictures matching in width would be better and look more pro. Develop a More Masculine Voice for exemple isn't matching the witdh standard.
Overcome Erectile Dysfunction is a low resolution picture. Blurring and pixelization are visible. You certainly know much more than me in photography so I'm sure you understand already. Finally, I thought the search box had been removed and I've just noticed it's on the bottom page now. It's a slight detail (and I personally prefer its current location) but putting it back to where it was in the first place would be more obvious for the first visiting customer's eyes probably. I'm certain all these details have potential to increase your sales.
Is there a time limit for using your GCs by the way?
(02-02-2011, 10:38 PM)Shannon Wrote: [ -> ] (02-02-2011, 01:29 PM)Elusive Wrote: [ -> ]An idea just struck me.
Would it not be good to create opportunities to use the chosen language? Like seeking out people who speaks the language. So there is someone to talk to. "Learn by using"-ish
Good idea. And how would you go about doing that?
I'm not telling it's a bad idea but I do not desire this kind of statement in the titles I bought. I like the Arabic script the way it is right now, it's perfect for me and I suppose it will be the same script for the titles I'm awaiting with the difference of another language name, say "Spanish" instead of "Arabic".
Shannon, if you decide to follow with Elusive's idea, in the building process before any modification/addition in the script for the 2 language learning programs I bought, can you make two 4G for me with the current 4G script, just as you initially intended to do?
If you're okay I will let you know privately which titles I bought.
In my opinion, making such a change in the script might not be necessary since there's already "I do what it takes to learn..." and similar action oriented messages in the script. So, Elusive, if seeking out people to talk to is your innermost desire you will naturally be prompted to act on this thanks to the already pretty much complete learning language script.