07-21-2017, 10:39 PM
I think DMSI might be making my Hip hop writing ability better. Either that, or having used Natural song and lyric writing subliminal, or the fact that I've been studying it and practicing it daily for many months now like 7 months.
But here is an example of rhyming patterns i'm capable of now, I wrote an entire song in hour, showing you only one verse.
Emotional wreck, the potion i sipped, made me go through motions
it left, me motionless, for moments id sit, wishing i wasn't in this hopeless predicament
wishing i hadn't sinned, wishing i had been a better son, wishing they hadn't been,
as bad as they were to me when i was ten, wishing id had never have lied to them
wishing i never liked to sin, wishing i wasn't so fucked in the head its sick
I wish instead of selling I stopped instead
wish i hadn't said yes like a bobble head
probably fail the chance to wins less then 5 percent
a problem kid, dont go just cuz you,
vibe with him, ride with him, feel alive with him
when i spit i feel alive within , i feel the inner workings
of god begin , or satan its hard to say, honestly i was born to slay
my words they morph in ways, form in ways
having you analyzing my words for days
i was born to slay sway one day, i swear I pray,
for better days & better ways for better pay..
that's why i started rhyming and put the scale away.
I was TERRIBLE at writing 6 months ago. I feel like subliminals have helped me progress at a much faster rate. I was absolutely garbage before.
Either that or practice makes perfect, or both.
But here is an example of rhyming patterns i'm capable of now, I wrote an entire song in hour, showing you only one verse.
Emotional wreck, the potion i sipped, made me go through motions
it left, me motionless, for moments id sit, wishing i wasn't in this hopeless predicament
wishing i hadn't sinned, wishing i had been a better son, wishing they hadn't been,
as bad as they were to me when i was ten, wishing id had never have lied to them
wishing i never liked to sin, wishing i wasn't so fucked in the head its sick
I wish instead of selling I stopped instead
wish i hadn't said yes like a bobble head
probably fail the chance to wins less then 5 percent
a problem kid, dont go just cuz you,
vibe with him, ride with him, feel alive with him
when i spit i feel alive within , i feel the inner workings
of god begin , or satan its hard to say, honestly i was born to slay
my words they morph in ways, form in ways
having you analyzing my words for days
i was born to slay sway one day, i swear I pray,
for better days & better ways for better pay..
that's why i started rhyming and put the scale away.
I was TERRIBLE at writing 6 months ago. I feel like subliminals have helped me progress at a much faster rate. I was absolutely garbage before.
Either that or practice makes perfect, or both.
