Shannon's Journal Discussion Volume 3

[Shannon]

Hi Shannon. I just wanted to tank you (again) for making the products, and saying I am impressed about the struggle you have gone through to come where you are. I don't know how it has been but I think I can imagine. Those entrepreneurs that dedicate themselves to what they believe in and do it with fierce commitment over years are truly inspiring and impressive. I'm sure that it will pay off and you will get the success you anticipate in the long term.

"Tank" you for noticing.

One thing I have reflected upon, which maybe is done intentionally for reasons I don't know, is that the description for your product pages is written in a way that members here understand them, but people from the outside new to this stuff, will probably find as confusing as reading the description of a heavy-machinery ment to be used in a industrial park. Maybe you are doing it that way until you are truly satisfied with your products (I guess when you have enough 6G titles)... However, I would think you could have use of hiring a marketing agent (if you are not able/willing to put the time into doing it yourself) to formulate the products in a way that can be more easily absorbed by a general person. This would probably improve your conversion (people buying who see the page) and your number of visits, as the descriptions would go more hand in hand with what people search for on google for finding the solution for their problems (depression, etc).

I'll go take a look at what you're saying.