Initial Response

[RainbowAbyss]

"Observations becomes, in toto, perpetually"
spelling error lol
Just honing my skillz for the scripts
but in all seriousness r u saying we have a potential say
In the actual wording of the scripts?
that's awesome!

[Alpha3767]

My first suggestion would be to make Become Irresistibly Attractive To Beautiful Women 7.1 as an add-on module for the Alpha Male training subliminal set same like Seek The Challenge! program.

Second suggestion is to explicitly specify single/available women in the script for Become Irresistibly Attractive To Beautiful Women 7.1.

-Alpha3767

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Seek The Challenge! (4G/Type B)

Current Script: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly as it is possible to do safely in these directions.

Suggested correction1: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly as it is possible to do [and] safely in these directions.

Suggested correction2: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly [and safely] as it is possible to do in these directions.

Suggested correction3: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly [and safely] as [ ] possible in these directions.

-Alpha3767

[Elusive]

Suggestion for improving the language learning subs
It would be good to create opportunities to use the chosen language?

"I now actively, look for people, who speaks "insert language" and engage in conversation with them."

"I now enjoy to seek out people, who speaks "insert language" and engage in conversation with them."

"When speaking "insert language" with other people, I will on instinct, use all my knowledge and experience to speak as natively as possible."

Something like that, if there is room in the scripts.

[K-Train]

(02-03-2011 03:58 AM)Alpha3767 Wrote:  My first suggestion would be to make Become Irresistibly Attractive To Beautiful Women 7.1 as an add-on module for the Alpha Male training subliminal set same like Seek The Challenge! program.

Second suggestion is to explicitly specify single/available women in the script for Become Irresistibly Attractive To Beautiful Women 7.1.

-Alpha3767

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Seek The Challenge! (4G/Type B)

Current Script: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly as it is possible to do safely in these directions.

Suggested correction1: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly as it is possible to do [and] safely in these directions.

Suggested correction2: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly [and safely] as it is possible to do in these directions.

Suggested correction3: I am now challenging myself in the directions I want to improve, and I am improving myself as quickly [and safely] as [ ] possible in these directions.

-Alpha3767

I agree with the above and it would also be nice if Develop an Aura of Sexiness could be brought up to 4G and be a module for the Alpha set as well.

[Shannon]

I apologize for not making the thoughts in my mind clearer. I was very tired.

This area is intended to be used as follows.

I post a script, or a batch of scripts, and you guys check them out. While I appreciate your assistance as offered, we have to keep the sections of the forum separate for the purpose of minimizing the time I need to spend looking for what I am looking for. There is another section or two where your current suggestions, except for towards language program, would be more appropriate. And, the language program is currently closed for building.

[Shannon]

(02-03-2011 01:28 AM)RainbowAbyss Wrote:  "Observations becomes, in toto, perpetually"
spelling error lol
Just honing my skillz for the scripts
but in all seriousness r u saying we have a potential say
In the actual wording of the scripts?
that's awesome!

Thanks for that. lol

If you find a way to improve a posted script that impresses me enough that I use it, yes. Whether it be particular wording, or a suggestion/statement in the script.

[RainbowAbyss]

Cool

[Clamshell]

I'm looking forward to giving any assistance that I can.